All Comments on 'First Opportunities Ch. 02'

Beautiful story! Looking to see where you'll take this

I love the story. My preference is combine the first three (at least) per submission. Again my preference, I like settling into a good long read.

I started with 3. I'm headed back to read again. My critique there is that I got a little confused during the couch scene. A little jumpy but I love where you're going.

Thanks for putting yourself out there and sharing your gift.

No comments, folks? Adding a Ch. 03. Lmk if you like it! 🫶