All Comments on 'Five Gold Rings Ch. 03'

Excellent. Inventive. What an idea to enable you to play across all sorts of scenarios and fetishes - I expect. I agree with others the first chapter was too short. Odd to rush onto a second device so quickly. But you are taking the second device much more slowly and it is all so intriguing just where you are going to take this. I did like the practicalities in the chapters like avoiding nipping Patrick's skin. I shall follow with interest the next chapters.

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