All Comments on 'Foolishness & Humiliation Ch. 03'

I really enjoyed this series of stories--She certainly raised my attention to its fullest!

Am finding the series very enjoyable, can't wait to see what else befalls our star performer, keep the humiliation coming.

This young lady loves the humiliation and I love the story! I can't wait to finish reading the rest of the chapters. I hope they are as good as the first three.

This is a good solid story. The characters are wonderful and the scenes are steamy. You have developed a wonderful protagonist wriggling on Marianne's hook. There is a haunting realism about it too, like, if it ever actually happened, this is what it would be like. It's very good.

The writing is good, with a few exceptions. Thinking back on the series so far: words like "woodenly" stand out when one repeats them. I shouldn't throw stones (cause I live in a glass house), but there are a few too many grammatical errors for my liking. I don't expect there to be none, I mean everyone is allowed a few. Fortunately it doesn't detract too much from the work.

I haven't read too many stories like this, but this one is fun.

SN

Highly erotic!!!

These chapters are getting better brilliant.