by Sabineteas
This is a good solid story. The characters are wonderful and the scenes are steamy. You have developed a wonderful protagonist wriggling on Marianne's hook. There is a haunting realism about it too, like, if it ever actually happened, this is what it would be like. It's very good.
The writing is good, with a few exceptions. Thinking back on the series so far: words like "woodenly" stand out when one repeats them. I shouldn't throw stones (cause I live in a glass house), but there are a few too many grammatical errors for my liking. I don't expect there to be none, I mean everyone is allowed a few. Fortunately it doesn't detract too much from the work.
I haven't read too many stories like this, but this one is fun.
SN
This young lady loves the humiliation and I love the story! I can't wait to finish reading the rest of the chapters. I hope they are as good as the first three.
Am finding the series very enjoyable, can't wait to see what else befalls our star performer, keep the humiliation coming.
I really enjoyed this series of stories--She certainly raised my attention to its fullest!