All Comments on 'Footjob Fun'

Great story. Keep them coming Kim34DD.

I agree with Cozzie. Short and Sweet, which is how I like them. Keep up the great work :)

Great story Kim! So sexy! Keep them coming!

I enjoyed it! 5*

Let’s have some more.

Great story by a lovely writer

Hot story Kim! Really made me wet

Really liked the story. Was a bit short but would love to read another one by you

That was a very good short story and I enjoyed it tremendously.

Just for future references: "James and Sarah were both cousins and both 20." This should be: James and Sarah were both cousins and both TWENTY " SInce there are only two of them you don't need to say "both cousins".unless you mean they were both cousins of someone else.

"House party" should be two words.

"They were jealous of her 32DDs". Everyone knew her bra size?

"Your boobs are so good Sarah." In diaogue you must put a comma before the person's name.

"James noticed a few girls that had cum on their lips even." I don't know what that means.

"Thanks(comma) James(period) (capital C)an you open the door? Here's the key(period) I don't think I could manage it,"

"It was at least 8 inches long" Dick sizes in inches is a real no-no. It's juvenile, but it you insist on it at least write it properly:"Eight inches long".

giggles done that.

Great story. Loved it! Very sexy

Good narrative and a happy ending!

Love it, I love incest stories and foot worship!

You covered them both very nicely. Short and to the point. You Rock!

Well written , a lovely subject , feet are so sexy aren’t they