All Comments on 'For Carol and I'

Just one word for this: STUPID!

"Hey, Dude, I'm going to Denver next week, and I was wondering if I could borrow your wife for some grins." You lost me when he asked to borrow the wife. It's too short for the characters to be anything by cut-outs, so nobody in this story was even remotely likable.

Four works with 14 followers--and I see why. At some point, your stories become like graffiti.

Even though you have to admire the writer for his effort, this was one of the dumbest stories I have ever read.

You're right, I didn't find this entertaining. And not for anything you might have to be a reason. It was just a vehicle for another asinine cuckroaching story. Another wife blasted by the infamous Martian Slut Ray. Ed and Carol have marriage problems, how do they work on them? Ed approves of Carol's weekend of infidelity and Carol jumps on her opportunity to be an adultress. No evidence of remorse, second thoughts, guilt, self-reproach, nothing. Just embracing the chance to drive further into their personal swamp moral failure.

"Many readers won't find it entertaining (as it's an interracial fetish story but I posted it in Loving Wives) and I understand that."

There, fixed that for you!

That's a really fucked up story!

We’re supposed to believe she typed all that?

"For Carol and I"? Brush up on your grammar. And, what's the point of the story? Where's the drama, the conflict, the denouement? What is so unusual about this cheap slut that she deserves a story? Boring.

I like the true stories better

For those who are very critical: please suggest to me stories that you like and I will try to improve. Thank you.

You get off on this bullshit? Really? Being a willing pathetic cuck is the worst thing and any sane man can be. But i guess you are not normal.