All Comments on 'For Miss Amy - A Slave's Fantasy Ch. 02'

Poorly written by John.. sad fuck .. Herr.

Again, your opinion is noted and disregarded.

Not that badly written, in my opinion. Let's face it, there aren't too many Ernest Hemingways submitting to Literotica! As a fellow Literotica author, I know the work that goes into writing a story, and then, even with proof reading, errors in grammar, etc. get through. The point in these submissions is to entertain the readers, not to get a good grade from one's English teacher, and I believe you accomplished that goal. Keep it up.

Thank you Submisky35!

I hope she ties him up to her bed and sleeps on top of him next. Haha!