All Comments on 'Forced Whore Ch. 01'

Début intéressant.

Ce serais amusant de la prostituer et de la faire violer par des animaux .

Peut être la mettre dans un glory hole

Just because you fuck corpses doesn’t mean you’re experienced enough to write from a woman’s perspective.

An outstanding first attempt. I look forward to more of your work

Love the dirty talk.

Yes, a good first effort. A bit short, but no worries. It is good to read a kidnap story that does not involve drugs or magic gel or brainwashing. The best news for you is that you were dissed by whackdoodle. He is a curmudgeon who often marches to his own negative drummer. It appears he thinks you are a guy, but your bio says differently. Keep going! Tell us more about her. Perhaps back up to give some history.

Good story. Treat that cunt like a whore.

All the damn cock teasers out there who should be fucked.

I hope you put in more about risking an unwanted pregnancy, and her feelings about that possibility.

Fucking Hot !! Love reading such stories. Would like to read a sequel or a prequel.

Great story. Fuck the haters. Keep them coming! So hot I wish it was longer

Great, visual, sexy turn on! Favorite kind

My cock is rock hard

hot asf, this makes me Thirsty

Loved it!

Hot and well-written. Many writers on this site don't know the difference between breath and breathe. I'm sure I'm not alone in hoping you'll write more stories.

Nice story, looking forward to reading more

Good writing. But I just have to say he would have never seen the morning light if he had not chained me. Sorry I never could stand a bully. I know it is fantasy and the sicko tells himself that all women are whores and he is God. News flash I only pray that some woman is going to kill him given half a chance and good riddance.

I loved it. Very good entertaining story. Would like to see a part 2.

This is awesome. More please !

Even for a fantasy this is deeply disturbing and non erotic. The male character falls into the category of “too stupid to live”

Tess (uk)