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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Excellent Story

I'm impressed by your series. I encourage you to continue. The one thing that you desperately need is a good editor/proof reader. Punctuation, spelling and misused words are common. Still your story is fantastic. Please continue even if you don't follow my advise.

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