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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

This is... Not well written. You need an editor at the very least, but if you're truly passionate about writing, consider taking some classes on fiction writing. There are some fundamental errors that go beyond an editor's job.

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Trying out kinktober. I'll be trying to re-edit my work when I get time this month but for sure in November when I'm not trying to force my self to grow. My twitter is: https://twitter.com/NineHorseHitch If you want to tip me use: https://ko-fi.com/ninehorsehitch