by vanalas
what a chapter indeed! and this is only half of the full climax. so many turn outs of events. good job vanalas! but you kept your readers hanging ang hungry for more!
Finally some good nice! Maybe now Elena and Jim will get their punishment and Ben will get his happy ending! I got tired of the bag Guys winning and Ben losing!
Vanalas I thought chapter 8 was intriguing well, chapter 9 was absolutely grand! A twist on Elena, beautiful. I can't wait for the finale
You have finally put a lot of the pieces of this puzzle together and started tying up some of the loose ends. We now know that Ben is pregnant with his and David's second child, Jim is far crazier than originally imagined, and it turns out he's not Jerome's real son and also that Elena is even more devious than she originally seemed. I'm also fairly positive that Michael will turn out to be Ben and David's first child that Claudia bribed the doctor to lie about. What we still don't know however is why Claudia always takes Jim's side over that of her own children and why she doesn't see him as the danger he presents to her family. As we await the "grand finale", hopefully it won't be months in coming, can we dare hope for a true HEA ending with not only Davvid and Ben together, but also with Jim and Elena going to prison for attempted murder and Claudia being found for her deception. I originally planned not to comment until the end of this story, but this chapter was just too good not to!