- Incest/Taboo
- Forever Now
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Click here"How long?" she asked.
"Now," I whispered, kissing the tip of her nose. "And forever."
I kept my promise. I never left her again.
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A/N -- Hope you enjoyed it. Just a couple of things. I've never worked in the mines or in the oil industry. Though I did a little research for this story, it's obviously all made up, but it was merely a plot device in the end.
As for the racism incident, I'm more than old enough to remember what life was like in the 80s and 90s. Life wasn't easy for anyone at times, but for recent migrants, sheesh... Also, things like the 'White Australia Policy' are one hundred percent true. A quick search of Wikipedia will provide a wealth of information if you're interested.
(Just think, read some erotica, enjoy yourself, then learn something after that.)
- COMMENTS
Anonymous7 months agoAnother gem from the legend that is UltimateSin. I swear this guy cannot write a bad story. Every single one - EVERY SINGLE ONE - that I have read thus far always nails it. Every one of them has me emotional at some point throughout, often times shedding a few tears. I don't know how he does it but I hope he never stops cranking them out.
It was a little disappointing that she didn't save herself for him, given all the build up and the fact she'd been in love with him for so long. I thought that was what all that was for, to support that. It loses something in stories like these with this type of backstory when she fucks someone else despite being in love with another. For a story at least, and one with a backstory and build up like this, it would have just made more sense for me at least. Anyway, at least they ended up together so that's what really matters. I guess I've just been spoilt from some of the other stories I've read and I always hope for this special "bonus" to be present. I dunno I just feel it adds a certain extra to it, but maybe that's just me.
Anyway, top-tier story. The racism moments were very sad. I just can't understand how people can be so cruel and insensitive towards others they don't even know, especially such kind and innocent people that wouldn't harm a fly. I really hope this nonsense is one day eradicated completely, along with outdated views on incest and all that sort of shit. We need to encourage love; not hate.
Aussie19517 months agoIve read literally hundreds and hundreds of stories on this site over the years and I must say this would be one of the best stories I’ve read. Well done mate… ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Anonymousover 1 year agoWhat an excellent story, by an excellent author. No irritating grammar, tenses, dialogue or typo's. Perhaps due to competent editor(s)? Revisiting after a year+, still tugs at the heart strings.
Fortunately you stopped short of anal on this one. Your score could have suffered severely should LIT have allowed a score in the negative figures such as -1.
AWAKADS
xhristianjover 1 year agoFor a bloody bogun Aussie redneck your pretty bloody awesome Mate 😮😮😮 What I appreciate about your writing (other than the Aussie accent) is you understand how to build a story. So many amateur writers don't get the nuance of building character, dialigue and the story arch it's literally like a Lego set. Sure it's building blocks but it's about knowing where your going and how you want to get there and you do it so bloody well. Good on ya Cobber 😎😎😎
Anonymousover 1 year agoI'm a retired journalist/writer of 31 years, and I have but one comment on your story:
OUT FUCKING STANDING! An awesome piece of work! Nice job!
