All Comments on 'Forever Yours'

Good start, more please and maybe with some back story of how they got to where they are and where this is going next. All the way I hope.

You had a fantastic beginning, but when you moved into the anal stuff, it felt like the story shifted away from love and affection into raw sex for the sake of sex. It was like the anal was the sole point of the story all along. 4/5

Not bad for a first timer, hell of a lot better than my ongoing attemps.

Wellcome, I hope yoy continue to entertain us.

A little bit lacking in background of the characters. But still kudu's on language, spelling, tenses etc, etc.

A simple stroke story maybe? Sibling love should be deep and pure... In my opinion it should be more tender, so not to cause any self-doubt or 'you are using my closeness' sentiments.

As the ScottishTexan commented. Sentiments reflected the same from my end. I have never experienced or heard of anal without lube and more lube and more lube.

Well, what do I know? Sweet fanny f@$k all? Maybe.

It was a beautiful start, but they need to make love like lovers do, he will slowly fuck his sisters perfect pussy and fill her womb with his cum, they will be one forever! 4 stars.

Not fond of anal, but your story is very good. And hot, did I mention hot? Thank you.

Anal ruined everything you had going at the start. If anal is your thing then think about writing in that category and leave the bro/sis stuff alone? 2/5

I cannot wait to learn more about these two, and about you.