All Comments on 'Forgotten Ch. 05'

The jumping from dhampires to vampires in the beginning was slightly confusing and it took a little time to get back into the flow of the story. That being said the ending was good and I now wait for the next chapter.

I love this chapter.

I found some of the same sounding names and species names confusing but I'm really loving your story. I love how so much of their problems are believeable and based on mistakes. I don't think either is acting unexpectedly under the circumstances. I know some of the commenters have been negative about Michelle - but really how would someone actually react if their entire was based on lies and they found themselves married - I think I would act alot like she did. Can't wait for more!!