All Comments on 'Founders Ch. 88'

I'm a 41 year old 350 pound man and this chapter made me cry alone in my bed like a little girl. I feel embarrassed, but good writing!

I tried, really tried. Skipped about 70 chapters here and there. Should have sticked it to Montana or something. Never do something like this on the way to the stars. It's not worth it. Good writing anyway...

Never fear! More chapters to come. My new girlfriend is fucking me blind, and it's hard to find any remaining energy to write. I'm making slow progress, though.

I'm working on new chapters. I have two new chapters in rough form. Chapter 89 covers the first landing window two-ish years after our original sixteen heroes have landed. Thirty-two new characters have shown up! How to keep up with our familiar characters while meeting the new ones? And all the while, Zach dealing (or not dealing) with his grief over Berte. I'm getting it sorted, but I want to get it as close to realistic as I can manage.

"how exactly is she popping around stars inside of a week"

"oh she's not, she's practically out of the story now" :(