All Comments on 'Four Hands for my Birthday'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Good premise.

Sex too automatic.

Sirene is 38D? Cathy is "bigger"? Do you really think that's erotic?

Needs more playing before the blowjob.

Four stars.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Just as expected, this 'wonderful gift' doesn't come without a price, and she's going to be the one wanting to test the waters soon enough. This marriage already has stage 4 cancer, they're just too stupid to see it.

iameaseliameaselover 2 years ago

Nice try but it fell a bit short. Just lacked something.

Lets watch the reaction when she gets the same deal for her birthday...oh the exploding heads.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

There's a cuckling on the horizon for ol' hubby. Ain't nutting for free!

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Writing is a hobby, I'm self-published on Kindle and Apple. Some of these scenes might have been part of a published story, or they're just hot shorts I wanted to share.