All Comments on 'Four Square Ch. 01'

Off and running again!

What a welcome site to have seen a new story title listed in your bio! What an innovated method to not only "heralded" the newest adventure but as a means for us to be able to go back to read and re-read in chronological order IC's history and his development as an excellent practitioner of observation and deduction.

Confident this "full" story is "in the can" before some potential "November delays" might be caused by Florida, Missouri and Auburn!

Glad Mrs. Troy is again part of the happenings. Your skilled character development of these "fictional folks" creates meaningful people (good and bad) for some of us.

Going to sit back and enjoy reading how this multi-case tale plays out over for the days ahead.

Thanks again for who and what you are and the hours and hours of reading enjoyment your skills deliver to we your addicted, often impatient BUT appreciative readers.

One Day at a Time,

The Ol' Man

to see you back. Great start.

ya know, sometimes you make me want to drink...A LOT!

Interesting start; very curious to see where it goes, am I.

Sc8

Hor damn, there is another classic in the works.

The second chapter of the story has been submitted, and hopefully will be published soon.

Nice to see you back in action, missed your writing.

Looks like 4 cases may at some time become 5, with a case at Carole's school or at one of the 2 Troy homes.

Glad to read the detectives at work after a long time....can't wait for next part.....

Glad to see you back.WW. This new story has so much going on I had to go back and read it again to keep up with all the characters. Nice to see Carole take care of a bully.Keep it coming, I am sure most everyone will figure out some of the outcomes as your story grows. Thanks

PLEASE keep them coming. Great storytelling.

It looks like part 2 might be stuck in the hopper because it hasn't shown up yet.

somebody is in deep doo doo

Cracking start. Interesting concept

*****Good opening chapter. Thanks for sharing.