All Comments on 'Freaked Out Ch. 04'

Abrupt ending leaves a reader frustrated. Prefer some closure after an expected denouement. But it is your story & tacitly challenging the reader to imagine one's own ending is perfectly acceptable. I'm a lazy reader though. Prefer the writer to entertain me & not force me to imagine an ending that might suit me. Lol!

Suggest an editor, too. Will amplify that with a msg on your submission page. Your stories do entertain me well. Love your character development, partucularly the female leads, strong but vulnerable. Keep wrting! Kudos!!

WS

Thanks for reading. yes. I saw your email. I've been using Grammarly, but you know I can't always catch everything. Another set of eyes is always great