by germanarmyboots
I just binged all chapters, lucky for me that you just uploaded chapter 5 :)
This is my new favourite series, you already got me hooked at Fellowship of the Ring tbh. I‘m a woman but it’s very pleasant to read from Grahams perspective, I really like how respectful and softspoken he is. Although I wouldn’t mind if he grows more confident and starts talking dirty ;)
Graham gives me more praising vibes rather than degrading, but that’s just my feeling.
About your writing: you got a good pace going on, the scenes are well balanced from frequency to intensity and more, your descriptions are on point supporting the world building without disrupting the flow. Also I love your descriptions of the women, really admiring the (very diverse) beauty of each one.
Graham and I share similar interests, so that’s a personal plus point. But I promise as a woman, a man like Graham would get so much pussy ;)
Keep up the good work, I eagerly await the next chapter!