All Comments on 'Freeplay'

Well, this turned out to be a nice treat. I like your style of storytelling. There is a certain old-fashioned charm to it and makes for a very enjoyable read. Keep up the good work.

Nice, hope it continues

Oh boy, enjoyed this one. Well done for a new writer. Please do not go near anal in future submissions.

Five stars. Loved it!!! Your work is quite good. Only fault was that Josh somehow became David for a moment during the story.

5 from me too. Loved it and hope you write more of this amazingly sexy couple. More please.

Great story. Keep it going. Don't even start the pill. You have a great family story going. Keep it all in the family. You can even incorporate Mom & Dad deeper into the fertile free use family storyline. 5☆

everything i like the whole story it had me hard the whole time and i shot a big load as they both orgasmed please add more to your story

Loved the journey - I was with the two of them all the way. Well written! Looking forward to more stories from you.

Outstanding story, great descriptions, very hot build-up and certainly kept interest alive at both ends! Keep at it!

The story was nice but not very well written.