All Comments on 'Freeuse 03: The Boss'

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AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

this is one is so long it got away from you a lil bit? it's barely a kitten fart in a stiff wind long. None of these make any sense, and the shorter they are, the worse that problem is. the biggest problem with free use stories is nobody has yet figured out how to give them a reason for the 'world' they live in to allow this, and you'd done even less along those lines than any past attempts.

CoyoteHowardCoyoteHoward10 months agoAuthor

@anonymous, actually, there's little hints in each scene. Part of the intent is, just with the characters, there isn't backstory.

Each installment will provide more and more context.

If it's not your cup of tea, fair enough.

Thank you for the feedback.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Please write more, these are hot af

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