by FreyaGersemi
This is an outstanding romantic story, beautifully written, with two marvelous characters. Their story needs to be continued very much. It deserves many more chapters. Five stars.
Thank you, Maydaypilot and Anonymous!! Their story will continue!!! There are many chapters already written waiting to get posted and many more still unwritten!!! 😁
This is a wonderful story, I enjoyed reading it from beginning to end. Excited to read more. Excellent work Frey, it was quite fun to read!
Great romantic story. Possibly we also need to hear about Cynthia and Katie's first time as wel!!
Thank you, guys!! 😊 And, @alexfourways, interesting that you should mention Cynthia and Katie's first time. As a writer, I aim to please!! It's "in progress" on Literotica already and should go live in less than 24 hours!! 😁
Definitely some of the series, most erotic writing I've had the pleasure of reading on here.. libby
@Anonymous (Libby?), thank you for reading and thank you for commenting!!!
Yeah, you guessed right, Freya.
God damn! But Freya is an addicted goddess, right? 😉
Not every guy likes totally shaven, of course. Is Cyn showing her lack of actual experience there, or is that just the modern way? Anyway, Freya shows that she does things her own way, and that bit of writing is jolly lovely 😀
The moment they took each other's virginity was quite sweet, Story Freya's stripTEASE was phenomenally erotic and arousing, with the droplet falling from her cunt on to his thigh the highlight and her need for cock just behind. Great versatility of writing imo.
Looking forward to Cynthia and Katie next!
@Anonymous, thank you so much!! I fear that I may be a bit sheltered, but what is a "snacker (sweet or savoury) with an hourglass?" Is a "snacker" slang for a lesbian and is an hourglass in reference to a woman's figure? 🤔
Ha ha. I guess it could be, but I just meant someone who likes snacks more than they should. Which I do 😀 I'll certainly be using it as slang from now on though! Hourglass is classically gorgeous though, right?
Wow, Freya. Thank you for your story. I enjoyed the two perspektives. Your description of their feelings went far beyond the pure discription of action. Your story was all about the feelings of your two characters. Thank you for that.
Some hints were written that the lust of our female hero would be too much and might end badly. Why? Personally I like all of us to be free and enjoying sex without punishment, loosing of control, pain and stuff.
So: please do not punish our female hero for enjoying sex by becoming adicted, loosing control etc.
@Anonymous, you wrote: "please do not punish our female hero for enjoying sex by becoming adicted, loosing control etc." I hope you've read at least a few of my stories and if you have, you can rest assured that I love a happy ending. Things may get a little dicey, but it all works out!! 🥰