All Comments on 'Friend, Employer, Lover, Dom! Ch. 04'

5 Stars

Loved it.

-26thNC Approved

Yes, it's a pity that the idiots are still not extinct. But this author and his story prove to us that they are among us!

OMFG this was so funny I swear this writer, and I use the word VERY loosely, is 14....but you can decide if that is his age or IQ.

I expect cuck shit to be generally either horrid, stupid or both....I mean after all it is hard for someone whos either gay or bi to really write about pussy being their number one thing, but this was just rank....like a morning after Budsweiser fart on a 95 degree day with a dew point of 77 while standing in a scolding hot shower.

You write a hot ass story this chapter was so hot I could have nearly lit a cigarette with it

1 Star

BigJB write some unintentionally hilarious stuff

26thNCuck Disapproved

I'm LOVING this slow ascent into her surrender and submission to him as not JUST her BOSS, but her Dominant! You're doing it at just the right pace. He knows she's doing it and she, now, is realizing it! I can't wait to see how you take it further!