by Nutbutterbish
Great story, starting with a slow burn that continues to grow the further you read. Real character development with Mari and Lee. Real personalities come out with both characters, more then I would have suspected but definitely makes the story real and very erotic. You can't be disappointed reading this
Started great but seemed kind of endless, just one extended sex scene after a while. Still I will read on in hopes of more story happening.
Oh, gosh, that was the opposite critique I was expecting. I am not taking offense, but I am glad you said this because I always think to myself since I am on an erotic site that folks won't care about the story as much as the sex. I am glad you commented and Thank you for reading, Anon.