All Comments on 'From Darker Places than I Want to Feel Ch. 05'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Lots of firsts

I enjoyed how this chapter developed, and the characters have developed rather well do far. About to start the next chapter, and I can't wait to see how things progress from this cliffhanger.

Tbonex66Tbonex66about 3 years ago
Flashbacks

I have loved your story from the start even with some imperfections. When I read this chapter it hit home and nobody can ever understand unless they have been there and gone through it. Us who have avoid the memories as we know what they do. But others who have never been there or ever experienced it has no idea what it is like and are unknowingly triggering us through no fault of their own. When I went to college after it was over I had a teacher ask if there was any vets in the class. I raised my hand and students started asking if I had killed anyone and I went ballistic but the teacher stopped it before it got ugly and I walked out. He explained to them why it wasn’t toot to do that. Keep your story going it is good

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