by belted and teased
It's well-written, titillating, even hot at times, but this guy is going to wind up in the hospital or the looney bin, or both. Despite some words at the beginning, there seems to be VERY lttle love coming from the wife here. She's willing to humiliate him, get herself used to immense cocks so he'll never be able to satisfy her again, physically abuse him to the point of wounds, and on and on... I hope he survives this.
On the other hand, I find myself anxiously awaiting new installments, and cursing the author for taking so long.
Another excellent chapter hope to see them more often great writing. Your Fan
I’ve commented before that the scenes play out unrealistically at times. Broken skin on his ass and no aftercare following the beating. Not what a responsible Domme would do. Both should be addressed particularly because pain is not Bryan’s kink. I suppose it can be excused because Donna is an inexperienced Domme herself. You include these interludes where Donna “checks in” with Bryan and expresses her concern for him. I think you would be better served showing that concern in the way a responsible Domme would (i.e. realistically). Thanks again for sharing your story with us.
This is plain brutality and gives very poor representation to those that are into BDSM & CFNM. I can't believe I read this far into these chapters before realizing that it's already dug a deep hole that it won't climb out of. I'm done.