All Comments on 'From Fantasy to Reality in the Naked City Ch. 09'

I am writing this comment before reading your story to tell you that I am totally loving them and enjoying them. Would request you to keep on writing them.

Also add new stories with so slight variations but never a wife raring to go and fuck from day1. A shy and prude to start with while hubby always behind her motivating her. Thanks a lot.

Erotic as always...

Shopping part is going erotic when stranger move close to Susan tits and scene got cut and changed

This whole series is just spectacular! Waiting with baited breath for the next installment.

Love the story. Would want to my wife to act and do the same except I would not want her to have sex with Derrick. I suspect Edward is having second thoughts.

Damn you are drawing this out so well. Can't wait for the next part, they should extend their stay.

Writting this after reading and am totally overwhelmed. Must continue this for more parts.

Pl accept these suggestions

1. Being slutty and whorish is not bad and they should come to realise this

2. Grocery shopping was exceptional, more scenarios like these.

3. Take her to non nude sections and make her stand out

4. Maybe a strip club experience

5. Changes will look more prominent back home. Adventures with household help and other related things and more contemplation.

6. Now her adventures on normal beaches and only topless beaches must be seen.

Continues to leave you wanting more though the constant referencing throughout the chapters of how Susan has morphed from a conservative housewife to a confident sexually charged woman is not necessary and becoming repetitive

You are a talented writer, thank you. Really waiting for your next chapter.