by Thomas_Lodge
Conner is a straight up asshole jerk, but Patrick is the worst kind of gay guy - pervy and kinda predatory. And Robbie is not much of a friend really. He knows Conner is desperate, acts like he’s being nice, but really is whoring him out by showing a video of him without his knowledge, making him show his dick and ass to Patrick, and constantly talking about getting paid back. It’s impossible to like any of these characters and I feel like it’s only going to go downward from here. So I guess I’ll just stop reading now.
Marc,
I don't know what you are expecting on Connor here. You have to be crazy if you think he's going to change in just one single day, within the span of two chapters. Have you seen someone doing a 180 on their personality in a heartbeat? Of course not.
Can't wait for part 3 Thomas! Your stories are amazing, tho I hope this time you make the characters more intelligent: your coach story was hot af but the main character legit had a brain the size of a peanut, so I'm hoping this time Connor isn't as oblivious :)