All Comments on 'From Mother to Mare Pt. 03'

it was going good right up to the point where you made him a pussy. He would never had let that happen if he was the dominant in the relationship.

What rubbish

This chapter was absolutely horrible. I don't know what happened to you between the other chapter and this one. It is so far off the deep end I don't know what to say. This one really needs to be deleted and you need to reread your own work to find your way again.

yeah you destroyed something that was actually kinda good

Please redo this Chapter as it didn't fit in as good as the rest!

Also he should have impregnated her ...

Don't mind the hate comments. It's still good.....please continue and finish the story