All Comments on 'Fucked Hard'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Ironically, that didn't make much sense.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Love your writing. Very sexy and erotic story. Thank you so much for sharing. Keep up the great work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

There were some odd changes in perspective and pronoun ("you slowly enter me" but then "I rub your clit;" "place my mouth on my pussy" etc) that honestly took me out of the story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago
too short!

This story has a wonderful romantic atmosphere, but it is much too short, and certainly needs to be continued.

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