by ItAllMakesSense
Love your writing. Very sexy and erotic story. Thank you so much for sharing. Keep up the great work.
There were some odd changes in perspective and pronoun ("you slowly enter me" but then "I rub your clit;" "place my mouth on my pussy" etc) that honestly took me out of the story.
This story has a wonderful romantic atmosphere, but it is much too short, and certainly needs to be continued.