All Comments on 'Fucking my daughters ex Ch. 02'

This was a very good two chapter story

Coldly written, no emotional tributes. Good for a stroke story if that was what you were going for. I hope you expand your writing talent. Good luck.

I'm not sure that Anonymous understands what you were getting at when (s)he says "Coldly written, no emotional tributes [sic]." My read is that this is a coldly unemotional relationship. Your vastly experienced character is enjoying the sex for the sex, with a nice side helping of ego gratification from the adoring puppy. Nothing wrong with that. Nice to see an empowered woman enjoying herself.

As for it being a good stroke story, (s)he got that right. Nothing wrong with that, either. It's why a lot of people come here (no pun intended).

I enjoyed it on both levels.

Same as chp #1; more "education". Is he back doing Lydia? He should compare the two, just do not tell Lydia he is also fucking her mom.