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All Comments on 'Fugitive Twins Pt. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

It's an interesting start and has great potential. I hope you will continue the story, love to see where you take it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Looks rushed. But a good start. Just take your time building this and not rush into sex or transformation (in the head).

robertw61robertw61almost 2 years ago

I hope you will continue the story

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

needs a second part to where he gets implants and they live happily ever after

Shy1oShy1oalmost 2 years ago

Hope to see this continue, short but I like the premise.

amenarimixamenarimixalmost 2 years agoAuthor

I've already begun working on this story, so don't be concerned about its length. The second chapter will be at least 10K words long. The first chapter was only a teaser. So it's time to drop your expectations.

DianeRedfernDianeRedfern8 months ago

I hope the next chapter is coming soon

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