All Comments on 'Fulfilled Desires Pt. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Great continuation!

Loving it, hope it won't take 8 months before we get part 3. Being a little bit more descriptive about the physical changes and the pleasuring as they occur would really bring the whole thing up a notch; it's fine to tell how the girls bodies look like, that they are being fucked and enjoying it, but the how it happened and how they reacted to those changes, physically and psychologically, is, in my opinion, what makes that kind of story great.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
That is one good corruption.

Really this is quite a joyful ride. I wonder what next for this story.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Need to write more!

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Thank you everyone for coming here. I hope you have enjoyed the stories as much as I have enjoyed writing them. I love creating worlds to delve into and imagine and I hope you continue to follow along on this journey. My current writing projects include finishing part 4 to 6 o...

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