by ThatGuyMan
Loving it, hope it won't take 8 months before we get part 3. Being a little bit more descriptive about the physical changes and the pleasuring as they occur would really bring the whole thing up a notch; it's fine to tell how the girls bodies look like, that they are being fucked and enjoying it, but the how it happened and how they reacted to those changes, physically and psychologically, is, in my opinion, what makes that kind of story great.
Really this is quite a joyful ride. I wonder what next for this story.