All Comments on 'Fulfilling the Bargain'

by Dodrick

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looking4itlooking4italmost 5 years ago

Meh. This is becoming stereotypical storyline here.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
not much to like

Thanks for writing but I didn't find this erotic or sexy at all. Pretty bland tale of a couple that shares. At least in this case we learned that the husband also gets to play with another mans wife rather than just the wife getting extra on the side.

OPrimeOPrimealmost 5 years ago
Really Dumb

What a bunch of morons. Can't say anything good about the story.

26thNC26thNCalmost 5 years ago
Out

We've run out of new ideas. Just like today's movies, everything is just poor remakes. There is nothing new here at all.

patilliepatilliealmost 5 years ago
Oh Lord, another cuck author

The side deals that the wife is making behind the husband's back would set me off, this should all be agreed upon beforehand. the husband's acceptance of this scheming, due to the fact it makes him super horney, is what makes him a cuck,

payenbrantpayenbrantalmost 5 years ago
Another disaster relationship....

...these are getting a little predictable.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago

It’s hot I guess but she is being a sneaky conniving slut . It at least has them both getting action. I’m not into any form of cheating, even if both are good with it unless it’s just a fictional story and I definitely don’t like one sided stories where only the wife fucks anyone and everyone. Also the one big question is if they are happily married why do that on the birthday? Shouldn’t that kind of day be special to the couple ? Why not just some random day before or after

NonSequitourNonSequitourover 4 years ago
Dumb cuck story

Jack cums on her stomach, yet hubby is fucking her through cum dripping lips. If you can't remember where the load went, just stop writing.

DodrickDodrickabout 2 years agoAuthor

I write stories for my wife and then post them for others to enjoy. I view these stories as part of a set of short story cycles. Stories can be read independently but may refer to events in previous stories. If you are interested, the reading order for the first two cycles (Married with Benefits and The Second Year) can be found below.

Married with Benefits: In the Night, Not So Home Alone, The Pick Up, Working Late, Jack, After the Banquet, Breakfast at the Manor, The Sands of Michigan, Couples Massage, Watched in the Park, The Overdue Bachelor Party, All Tied Up, The Secret Lounge, The Good Seats, Class Dismissed, Scripted, Pay Per View, The Lust Virus, Good Vibrations, The Photo Album, The Changeup, A Snowy Evening, The Twelve Days of Christmas.

The Second Year: Pornstar, The Perfect Day, Rushing to the Edge, Helping Out, On the Open Road, As Requested, Student Affairs, Under the Full Moon, Fulfilling the Bargain, Urges, Collecting Souvenirs, The Bus Ride, A Little Crazier, A Walk on the Beach, Number One Fan (Forthcoming), Pirate's Booty (Forthcoming), In the Shed (Forthcoming), Denial (Forthcoming), The Secret Lounge Challenge (Forthcoming), Appetizer (Forthcoming), Massage Therapy (Forthcoming), To the New Year (Forthcoming).

snarbozsnarbozabout 2 years ago

Cheating is never pretty

Ridiculous69Ridiculous693 months ago

No likable characters. Just lust driven fools who think with the dicks and vaginas. Why are any of them married since they are committed to anything outside their own selfish wants and desires. Awful

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