All Comments on 'Fulfillment'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Writing Good

When does she tell her husband she's a slut?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Not Yet Fulfilled

I loved it and I am hungry for more. I can't imagine why anyone would think her a slut as I find her amazingly candid and on the road to fulfillment, something she obviously isn't getting at home.

Where will it lead us?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
I did not see

the erotic part. just so called friends who were working on her so long that she went behind her husbands back. nice. even patient enough for any husband to not think anything bad. why ever did she be with her husband if this is so much better and worth more than anything else. nice surprise she did not even think of him one second.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
so fucking hot-keep writing

you're great, thank you

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Change of Person!

We start out in the third person (Lanie) and switch to Lanie-as-narrator. Bit jarring!

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