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Click hereTara's mouth hung open. A few of the guys in the room had a similar expression on their faces.
"Then my voice cuts through it all," Susan said, "'Lala, I want you to cum NOW.'"
"Huh!" Tara said as her whole body twitched. Dammit! she thought, realizing that if she had to take off her panties right then, everyone would know again that she was really wet. How does she push my buttons like that?
"I see that you like that idea," Susan said.
Tara hesitated then said, "no," weakly as she felt a powerful apprehension building in her.
"Oh please!" Susan said with a chuckle. "Let's see if I have this straight. You're safe here. We all know you're practically wetting yourself at the idea of shucking your clothes off and being sexually objectified and humiliated in front of all of us. We all have nothing to do for the next, let's see, 33 hours. I've got a big bag of toys and restraints. Most importantly, you've got some limits that still need to be tested and we have an audience of handsome men who I'm sure are all more than willing to help any way that we need them to."
Susan paused for a moment then added, "we all know what's about to happen."
Tara felt a familiar panic, but she was still in control. Susan couldn't make her do anything. "You're forgetting that I have to agree to it. You don't get to decide for me. I have a choice."
Susan's bubbly laughter was as infectious for everyone else as it seemed dismissive and mean to Tara. "I suppose you have a choice, but I've already decided what you're going to choose. Your choice is between submitting to me, which means you getting completely naked right now, so that, with the help of these kind young men, I can spend every minute of the next day and a half giving you orgasm after orgasm after mind-fucking-blowing orgasm that will make yesterday's humping of this table leg seem about as exciting as a peck on the cheek from your grandmother. That, or you could drive home two days early so you can drink tea and eat sausage rolls with your dad's British neighbors."
Full panic set in again for Tara. The intoxicating mix of exposure, losing control and being shamed in front of all these college boys grabbed her and wouldn't let go. "But what if there's stuff I really don't want to do?"
"Like what? It's still all the stuff that you put down in the Fun Sex Slave Play Time questionnaire."
"Um, the thing you said you were going to do to me tomorrow morning." Tara gave Susan an especially embarrassed look.
"Oh. The enema. Yes, I don't want to do that either. We'll skip enemas and butt plugs, okay?"
Tara looked around at Mark, Shane and the frat boys, all of whom were either sitting at the dining room table or standing around now. What's happening? she shook her head to clear it. "Yes," she said, weakly.
"What was that?" Susan snapped.
"Yes Mistress."
"That's better," Susan said. "Lala, do those clothes you have on belong to you?"
"I...," Tara was unable to grasp how this could be happening to her again, "no Mistress. I don't own anything Mistress."
"Get up Lala, and stand over there where everyone can see you." Susan had a broad grin, like she was settling back into a comfortable chair. "Raise your hands above your head like we've chained them up above you." Tara did as she was told. "Instead of having you take off your clothes, I'd rather see you be stripped this time." She turned to Mark and Shane. "Would you two like to do the honors?"
Mark didn't look in the least bit uncomfortable this time. He and Shane both had eager smiles on their faces as they removed her socks, unbuttoned and pulled off her blouse, pulled her jeans down to her ankles and off, unhooked and pulled off her bra and pulled her panties down to the floor. Mark unclasped her necklace. she hadn't put her stud earrings in again, so she was once again thoroughly naked and completely exposed.
As they were doing this, Susan was chatting. "Well that was easy. I didn't even have to snap my fingers. She's so gullible and stupid she didn't even notice that I never asked her opinion once." In a mocking tone, Susan said, "'I have a choice.'" Ha! This slut would have had a choice if she had the brains to use it."
Once Mark and Shane finished their task, Susan said, "Lala, spread your legs a bit wider. Mark, Shane, could you please spend a few minutes giving Lala a thorough groping. I want her all wet and juicy and I know that having all of us watch while you guys have your hands running all over her naked flesh will do the trick."
Mark and Shane were more than happy to oblige, both of them eagerly grabbing and squeezing her all over. Susan was busy putting out some sheets of paper on the table along with sign up sheets. "We're going to have an auction today, but before we get down to that, Mark and Shane are going to demonstrate how to fuck our slave properly. I think I may let her have her first orgasm of the day."
With Mark and Shane's hands running all over her body, Tara was becoming incredibly horny and full of excitement. Then something clicked in her. It was like a light going on. She tried to put her finger on what had just changed. She was naked and it was the same group of frat boys all staring at her and drooling. She knew they'd all be fucking her later, but that wasn't it.
She thought about the scenarios that her Mistress had described the night before and she knew that she didn't have any interest in the rough BDSM and gangbangs she had seen in porn videos. "I just want one master who loves me who I know will keep me safe," thought Lala. She looked at her Mistress and she knew that she'd found her. Lala loved her mistress Nikki and she'd do anything to please her.
- COMMENTS
argeelog8 months agoI don't think the four friends will get over this experience, especially as Susan showed herself to be cruel. It's bullshit to believe that she was doing it to help Tara. She was on a power trip and eventially both Tara and Mark will realise that. I gave it 4 stars for the writing and the plot.
lexlogan812 months agoAn exciting but difficult story for me. I've dabbled with a few humiliation stories myself (none worth publishing). What's missing for me is that while Susan claims to love Tara, she only demonstrates cruelty, Continuing the experience after Ty's evil suggestions was way over the top. Susan comes across as the sort of predator she claims to be protecting her 'best friend ' from.
Panchiman12 months agoI really liked this story. I thought you had a great understanding of stories like Joe doe, it was interesting to see something like that in a slightly more realistic context. I loved everything except the theme of the almost rape at the end. The characters are very good and have good chemistry between them, I would love to see more parts of this story (especially one where Susan has to be the slave).
lodobon12 months agoAuthorThanks so much for the excellent feedback. I'm still figuring out what I most enjoy writing about, so it is very helpful. I realize that I should have made the ending more definitive. The protagonist was obsessed with a specific part of the process of being enslaved, so this story was only intended to be about that part of the process.
EssEssCehabout 1 year agoFirst and foremost: this story is an amazing effort and sits easily in the 5-star-region.
I liked a lot of things in this story, so many things in fact that I probably will forget quite a few.
I love the fact, that things were done out of caring and love (even while I think it was quite disguided in execution) then out of malice as it is often the case in the ENF and Humiliation genre.
I like the fact that out of 20 (horny) people only one was an asshole who was dealt with accordingly. I personally hate the stories were every man, woman and child in the depicted universe is out to get the poor hero(ine).
I love the fact, that they had to get out of their way to get the "gentleman" out of these guys.
I personally come out of the BDSM-Lifestyle and it surprises me again and again how much tension a good ENF/Humiliation author can build while barely look into the fancy BDSM-toolbox.
I have to admit that this wuss of a gentledom nearly tapped out several time in this story because tension got too high at times. ^^
But in the end I kept going and I'm happy that I finished this story(part?).
Here are a few things I would like bring to your attention. It's of course up to you if you want to take my opinion into consideration.
- Your story was well thought out. The things did fall very well into their place. I think with more experience and stories you will become even better hiding the fact that some elements were setups to play out later.
- You might want to dose the tension buildup in the story. You can easily do such things by let one of the doms do 'maintenance' from time to time, like provide water and high calory food. It reminds the sub and the reader that the sub is cared for and safe.
- apropos food/water... every piece of erotic literature is a stretch on reality... allways and only you have to decide how much realism you want in your story. I send my wife flying in sessions far more tame then what you so marvellously depicted... It's amazing through how much water and calories she burns. A few Pizzacrusts and a token amount of water simply wouldn't have cut it at all to keep her energy levels up.
- Apropos Energy levels... whooo boy ^^ If I understand our dear Tara had first an Uni-Exam... (stressful/lot's of adrenaline... then was jumped and thrown into her first D/S session ever under high stress circumstances. Let's say I buy it that she fights through the session. Adrenaline in combination with Endorphines and Dopamine gets you through a lot... but then she is laid onto a dog bed. tbh... In the worst case she has a serious case of subdrop because all those lovely substances that let her go through it go away... or in the best case the adrenaline goes away first and she just falls asleep like a dead. I understand completely why you needed the conversation for plot purposes. What I want to say that maybe in the future you want to take energylevels into consideration.
You don't write in the BDSM-category, so proper and extensive care and aftercare can't be expected, but they would be appreciated nontheless. :o)
Proper aftercare after such a heavy experience ought to feel sooooooo good.
As I said,... your story scratched my limits allready few times. If you decide to chase the curve (every new part has to be more heavy and recless then the last) it's very probably I'll out somewhere next part.
You still have a lot of stuff left to explore in the story. A potential lovetriangle of Susan/Mark and Tara... what's the deal with the fourth one that was so bleak that I allready forgot his bloody name. There is lot's of story left for you to tell. I'm eager and a bit stressed to read it.
Thank you for sharing and much Love,
Your very wussy gentledom Tom
