All Comments on 'Fun with Victoria and Jane Pt. 01'

outstanding first chapter, very well written with the salacious details a perfect combination of teasing and sexy

I think the bi angle is best as long as both Victoria and Jane are both involved.

I enjoyed this. however I did have to stop after the first paragraph to read "Victoria and Jane" I wish I had known at the beginning reference. I think both ladies need to be in each chapter, even if Jane isn't in the same room while Vic is having her bi moment. I also hope Vince will be told what was going on in the office during his practice presentation. You are getting 5 stars from me, good job.