All Comments on 'Futako's Strange Circumstances Ch. 06'

I've been following this series as it's published, and have a bit of a love-hate relationship with it. Your prose is fine, and I like the setup: -romantic- futa is rare, especially if it's not marinated in BDSM, and the characters are charmingly quirky. It's the dialogue that gets me: it reads like something out of an anime, which is no doubt your intent, but then a lot of anime dialogue is monologuing to the audience in lieu of describing the scene in text, and it throws me a bit in the flow of things.

But that's mostly down to personal preference. Again, there's not nearly enough tenderness in stories like this, so I'm definitely invested in the long run.