by RoldenReacher
How is this a Valentines Day story? It’s about possession not love. Cat is turned into an object for Margot’s pleasure. The story even makes the case—mistress, owner, lover in that progression. The sad reality is that Margot will never know if Cat truly loved her and that question will haunt her forever.
I'm only a touch jealous of Cat, with 'a touch' being an obvious under exaggeration. Way hot and well written
Good but it could have been better, I wish we had gotten more from Cat's POV the change from first person to third person mid-story was jarring. I would have liked to know if Cat was straight or gay before the arrow. Given her situational nativity, it appears she was straight.