Game Gone Wrong

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While the game we played went wrong in one way, it ended up being right for me in the end. I want to have Jennie in my life for as long as I live, and she seems to want to be with me as well.

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 hours ago

Bullying like that in the story has led to ugly things including suicide. This is the story of a tragedy in the making that is reversed by a mostly unselfish young man who acts in true love.

A unique and interesting plot with real life characters that are well fleshed out.

I am compelled to rank it a five.

P.S. I must note that while the story is what I would expect from a 'woman's health' clinic, the fact is that from the moment an ovum is fertilised it is a human being. The mother supplies oxygen and nourishment, but all the baby does is grow and develop. From conception to death it is the same human being.

Part of the requirements for my 4-year university included, genetics, embryology, cell physiology and comparative anatomy. Objective reality/scientific facts, not propaganda is where I take my stand. Subjective reality is for those who want to play god.

My wife worked as a counsellor for over 20 years helping women who learned the scientific facts and realised they had killed their babies. She helped them not by lying to them, but by helping them find out how to forgive themselves and get out from under the cloud of guilt.

Normally I would sign my name, but in this case I am not looking for arguments of harassments.

HayboysHayboys1 day ago

Fabulous another 5 Star Story from you , In fact All your Stories are 5 Star ( some better than others but all too good to be only given a 4 Star Rating)

WetheNorthWetheNorth4 months ago

"nipple getting hander"

I am astounded.

N and R are not even close to each other on the key board

16GaDouble16GaDouble4 months ago

Ahhh, young love!

I enjoyed the read.

Hiram325Hiram3254 months ago

Nice story, an enjoyable read.

Bronco56Bronco564 months ago

Excellent story. I enjoyed it

5stars

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

I hope she remembers who the good guy is. A pity the goon who inpregnated her and told the world about it, didnt get a visit from her father to even the score. Maybe also a visit to the slimeball blackmailer one dark night as well. Then let the world know there there is an avenger in town. Bullies only understand strong pain in whatever form they deserve.

IC_Thru_UIC_Thru_U4 months ago

Nice story. I don't think I would have done the same things as the MC, but it seemed to work for him. I noticed that Jennie never told him she loves him back.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Well done!

5*

Tc

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