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by PollyAnnaBlack

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AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Thank you. Great first story, nice buildup and changes in direction. First he is an annoying frat boy, then an interesting person, then a regular acquaintance. Please keep writing

Babsy830Babsy8304 months ago

Oh yes, very very nice. Looking forward to your future works

PollyAnnaBlackPollyAnnaBlack3 months agoAuthor

Thank you for taking the time to give me feedback!!! it helps me become a better writer, and know where I need to adjust style wise.

This is a excerpt from a larger collection of works, following Polly Anna, through many adventures! Stay tuned to see where she ends up next!

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I am just a girl who used to rock on her heels in physics, writing about day dreams, memories, and more. Asking the questions of how a young girl lost innocence only to reclaim a strength in submission, and where that will lead her next.