by Daniel6700044
I enjoyed it a lot. You're obviously talented. I hope you can continue the story on a better platform than an iPhone.
Well-written and nicely paced; I much prefer stories that build up to the action, rather than jumping straight into sex. Looking forward to reading more.
Good story - had me right there with you. Impatiently waiting for chapter 2!
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