All Comments on 'Garden of Eden Ch. 03'

Beautiful, engrossing, a smooth clear path through the story. Not something a man could write.

Hi Gradstudent, thanks I guess? Curious as to why my writing is so feminine though...

If you are a woman you've got me fooled. The emotions and the physical feeling you express would be almost impossible for a man to experience.

Well written. Well expressed.

I hope we see more of your work.