All Comments on 'Genie in a Bottle Ch. 05: Jailbird'

by nikopheros

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Stormwalker10027Stormwalker100276 months ago

I think his final wish should be a backbone so he can enjoy his second wish more.

KerrionKerrion6 months ago

After his first wish, I was thinking his final wish should be that the genie could stay with him and they married. After his second wish, his final one would be that people saw him for him and not 5 times more than he saw them because nothing at that point could ever be real. Then a the story went on, that he'd never sought revenge in the first place because of how it effected everyone else. I wonder what he'll wish for now.

Michael56SmithMichael56Smith5 months ago

Jason has troubles and the effects from his first two wishes, ... that can be either more trouble or a good time, ... and what wish can he make now to straighten his current mess out? next chapter? next year? ;-) ttfn

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

"I know he's like totally hot and all, but so are other guys" - wonderful.

NashJR2NashJR23 months ago

Please continue this story

AnonymousAnonymous27 days ago

Ese, not essay

AnonymousAnonymous27 days ago

last wish: go back in time when the bully began and show some backbone. Don't run, fight. Otherwise he will ever be that poor spineless, cowardly and fearful worm that he is and always will be. No dick can ever compare or weight off his weak and awful charakter.

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