All Comments on 'Getting Help from My Sister'

Wow, that is hot! The question now is whether he should fuck Janet like he fucked his sister. Please write a part II

That was awesome. I'd love to see future chapters of this story.

Every mans dream to have a sister or gf that is a true slut. Keep the story going it is wild.

Hay Jennyspetz, welcome to the writers club. Good story line, flowed well. looking forward to future story's, either continuation of this one or ?? Looked like you or a helper did a good job of proofreading, keep it up.

Again, thanks for the story.

OK premise.

But basically boring sex.

Two stars.

Mmm it'd be interesting if he tricked Janet into a three-way with him and his sister. That'd add heat things up if you put it in the second part.

Thank you so much @tomasny it is my first ever story. Never thought of a part II, but now I might.

Poorly written, couldn't get past the numerous errors.

Overall, this was a well written and sexy as hell story. You might try to give more details about your characters and the mischief that they get into. Cranking out a Bro/Sis Incest story as your 1st one is intriguing. Keep writing and I will keep reading....this one is a good one to continue to develop from both the brother and the sister perspective, lots of possibilities for your characters.

Have a good read over before you publish it. There are quite a few errors and typos that make it distracting. That said, I did enjoy the story.

It was wonderful. Keep writing!

Great start, hope there’s more

Well done first story! I do hope you continue this storyline, but also that you continue to write more Literotica stories. Yes, there were a few mistakes, but those are taken care of with writing, or as they say practice make perfect.

Great start! Please continue.

Thanks for all the nice comments. It is my first and english is not my first language so sorry about all the errors. I will proof read better next time.

Don't care for Nora at all. Little sisters should be shy and naive, not total sluts. Who wants too have sex with any woman who will give it up to anyone? It's not special then. 2*

I read this and can't stop thinking about it. I had to come back to the story and leave a comment. I hope this becomes a series. So many directions this story can continue on. Mom & Dad's getaway is to a swingers event and come back and catches the two together. Sis gets jealous of brother's gf. Brother and mom start something only to be caught by sister or gf. So many avenues to explore. Great start, hope to see more quality stories like this.

When my nephews were of a age to understand, I gave them two pieces of advice:

1.If you don't ask, then the answer is 100% no; so you have nothing to lose by asking for what you want.

2. The truth ALWAYS hurts someone, don't let it be you.

Wonderful.

I did enjoy how well the story flowed.

Such a horny lil sis!! Loved it.. had me throbbing in no time.. might have enjoyed a slower burn I guess..

Your story had me so interested I had to read again and again.

Please continue your writings.

Almost like I was there watching the action.

Michael

Fun and sexy. Good story.

Ass to mouth is disgusting. 😒 In real life, his sister would contract a whole host of diseases from the feces covering his cock. 1/5

3*+ needs at least one more chapter where he tells his girllfriend and sister what he wants. Perhaps his sister seduces the girlfriend or finds out she's getting laid elsewhere.

Damn that was so hot. I wanted more. Just like Matt, I'm sure