All Comments on 'Getting her ready for Amsterdam'

Chap 2 ? This is so uncomplete ....

this is barely a start of a start of a story.

Your stories start out being very arousing and stop abruptly. I can only give three stars as the story is incomplete.

Whoa, Great Story, Great Writing, Great Ideas.... 5 Stars for the writer. I love a happy ending, I would really like to hear more about this story and what happens. Thank You.

This isn't a story. It's full of typos and just lame.

This is some serious crap!