All Comments on 'Getting Married Set Me Free Pt. 02'

by VanessaEvans

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dwr0242dwr02426 months ago

I hope there is more to cum!

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Five freakin' stars, I'd give you more if I could. I love, love, love your stories! I like the premise, I like the characters, i love the build up. If you ever get inspired, I'd love it if you'd be a bit more graphic/detailed/ descriptive in your actual sex scenes though. Not a complaint, just a request. I was so near completion when you mentioned having the brother but then it was over before I had fully appreciated the situation. I think just one paragraph of looking into your boyfriends eyes as you lowered yourself on his brother would have me sealing the deal.

Wilson SpaldingWilson Spalding3 months ago

So, this bit of dialogue kinda resonated:

"Well let's hope that that shy and nervous part of your brain gets over-written, or whatever, with the new exhibitionist you and I'd like to see you gang-banged by other guys."

...So, yeah... We're taking the slow road, but I'm liking the scenery.

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