by VanessaEvans
Five freakin' stars, I'd give you more if I could. I love, love, love your stories! I like the premise, I like the characters, i love the build up. If you ever get inspired, I'd love it if you'd be a bit more graphic/detailed/ descriptive in your actual sex scenes though. Not a complaint, just a request. I was so near completion when you mentioned having the brother but then it was over before I had fully appreciated the situation. I think just one paragraph of looking into your boyfriends eyes as you lowered yourself on his brother would have me sealing the deal.
So, this bit of dialogue kinda resonated:
"Well let's hope that that shy and nervous part of your brain gets over-written, or whatever, with the new exhibitionist you and I'd like to see you gang-banged by other guys."
...So, yeah... We're taking the slow road, but I'm liking the scenery.