All Comments on 'Getting to Know You! Pt. 01'

If only? I get the gist…But, if it’s a kazillion part story…stretch out the opening romp and please refer to Jane calling her husband Paul…instead of Mike?.. I almost got excited that the writing style was book like only for a let down to fast and trashy… cheeky, but trash to soon then ends to soon… sorry for the criticism, I usually on say good things and I will follow to the next chapter, u definitely have potential for writing great stories but outline, outline, outline and then reread…you definitely can make a story ❤️‍🔥❤️‍🔥❤️‍🔥 + I Love pretty 🦶😊🤔😊