by Edey
Love this story. Can't wait till the last chapter. I'll hope it doesn't take long😁
Very hot story! I wish every gay man would read this to learn how to be a good top!
It's nice to see their relationship developing, even if there are tensions and things are rushing along quickly. It's still nice that this is more than just sex. 5 stars, indeed!
Another great chapter for these two hot guys! I don't know if it's because Dallas' personality reminds me of my own at that age, but if I were him, I would've been thinking of a way to show everyone what an ass Martin is. That maybe a little childish but I've known so many Martins not to want to see one of them hoisted on his own petard. Chapter #3 easily gets *****s and leaves me wondering how this trip to San Francisco is going to end.
@JdGvD1
It doesn't as I already have it written! Not only that, I already have a volunteer editor for it :)
I just need to re-read it couple of time :)
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@BlowPopJ
Thank you, and you will have it :)
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@Straycatndc
That's a nicest compliment :D
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@nygayguy
Thank you, there will be even more tension in the next chapter :D
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MarcLuciFer
Sooo thank you! I promise you it will go along this line you want it to go )
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@Gaybriel
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@ Anonymous
I'm glad you liked it :)
You don’t have to ask for a 5 rating because you certainly earned that rating and even higher!!
A truly beautiful story about two beautiful people. Bravo!
Couldn't wait to read this next instalment! I've been checking virtually every day. Fabulous storyline and the sex between Dallas and Rory is sooooooo good; I'm so envious of what they've got and the sex they enjoy all the time. I'll read this again and again. Reading your stories always makes be wet, so very wet. Can't wait for instalments 4 and 5. Thank you again. Nigel.
Almost ended, but I had not much time to edit it with editor... :) Anyone want to help me :D?
Definitely hot stuff -- the sex, the quickly-developing relationship, and the story line. Well done!