All Comments on 'Girl Hunters of Fantasy Island Pt. 06'

oh great writer

i love your works!!!

thanks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

masterpiece

Well, kind of sad story. It probably could have some good sex but the grammer spoiled it. The changing of pov was disconcerting and distracted from the what the story was about.

Would love more rough sex!

Needs Less Prep and More Hard Sex!

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Hallo Dolly!

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I see a story in two parts... the first two pages are part one. Eve, the American Princess and the African Ape Girl!

The last four pages are part two, Is a young spoiled socialite, Miss Jennifer Van Horton, and Sally the butch Dyke!

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The way you were jumping back and fourth from person to person, was giving my translator the fits, but all in all it was a very enjoyable story.

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Queen Jackie and myself recommend that you find someone that could help you with Proofreading and Editing... I think Literotica might be able to help you with that.

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The End. 😆 😄 😉

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The Black Queen 👩🏿 and Gay kat 👩🏼‍!

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